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April 27, 2009
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In the World of Dreams by Voxian In the World of Dreams by Voxian
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this is Aki, *marykonoha's charater, and Glyfph, my charater, playing in a fantasy dream world... this is my part of a trade with *marykonoha, she drew this lovely pic for me: [link]

i put WAY more effort into this pic than i had to.... oh well....

right now, i think this is the limits of my artistic abilities... which is why I'm asking for critique, so please critique! i want to know what I'm doing wrong so i can improve...

Time: i lost track... uhmm... took me about a week...
Inspiration: art trade with *marykonoha and a dream i had...
done in April of 2009 with Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop CS2 on a drawing tablet

Glyfph and art copyright to =Voxian (me!)
Aki copyright to *marykonoha
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I like the idea behind this piece, two foxs playing gives off a sense of innocence one would expect in an imaginary world. The coloring is superb however it seems a little fuzzy and blurred around the grass area (but then it is a fantasy world XD) The tails on the blue fox appear to split at the tip rather than at the hind quarters (I'm not one hundered percent familiar with the character I'm afraid, if it was intentional to the character design I apologize ^^;) The under side of the tree is the correct shade however near the edges I would lighten it just a bit to give it more dimension. Excellent job ^^ I hope this helps!
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MischaLeCroix Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just loved it!
... wow, that´s amazing. Ilove that background. Go on like this ..., um and well one week to finish a pic like this isn´t to long I think. More important is that you like it. (lol, today my mother just told me Itake to much time for my pics BUT IT´S TOTALLY WORTH!!!)

PS: If there´s a mistake, sorry but I am not really good at english... :typerhappy:
Voxian Aug 16, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thanks! I really appreciate the compliments! <3

meh, i think one week is too long lol xD though... i guess you're probably right... it should take a long time... as long as you like the outcome...

no worries... i know a few ppl who don't know English very well...
Wow! Another wonderful pic! xD I love your ability to make backgrounds, etc., very beautiful! And on top of that, I love the two foxes, they're sooo adorable! I want to cuddle them owo

Really lol, great work. It makes my day when I get on dA and see all these beautiful pieces.
Voxian Jul 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
awww, thank you so much! :iconfoxyayzplz: you have no clue how much this means to me! i thought for sure that no one would look at these pics ever again, and i was starting to think that my art was going unnoticed.... but then you leave me all these comments on them! thank you sooooo much!

and I'm glad i could help make your day lol xD if you could cuddle them, I'd let you lol xD
Lol, yeah, I was gone for a while and it took me some time to get through the 100+ pictures accumulated in my messages box XD! But I couldn't resist stopping to comment on / fav some of your's. So again, it's no problem! ^-^ I'm glad I could encourage you to keep going :D

Yay! I feel honored, lol.
Nice! I like the grass and the background a lot. And of course, the Glyfph is cool.
Voxian Jun 21, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thanks! i put way too much effort into the background on this one lol xD

glyfph is awesome! lol xD thanks for the comments and the favs! :iconfoxyayzplz:
TsukiTsu May 16, 2009  Student General Artist
Messed up with the names on my comment, sorry ... >.> I meant Glyfph has the adorable playful pose that I love and Aki looks so entranced ... ^^;
Voxian May 20, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Hahaha, i noticed that too... but i didn't mention it.. it's ok xD i get charaters mixed up also... no biggy...
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